It’s Official

As of yesterday I am 31. Every year around my birthday I write really bad poetry…This year I have decided to share this really bad poetry…Of course it’s only sharing if people still read my blog…Enjoy!

Impenetrable

This armor can not be penetrated,
Its held for thirty years,
Its been dented slightly and scratched a bit,
But those wounds were easily polished away,
Swords burn briefly,
But the armor never gives in,
It works as a consciousness,
A chastity belt of sorts,
Its wearer is protected,
From becoming one of them,
This armor has not been penetrated,
Its concealed for thirty years,
The heart of its weary wearer,
Whose too tired to break free.

 

Gibberish 

 

My poetry sucks,

I can’t even rhyme,

I am an impostor, a poser,

With really bad time–ing,

I have no gift for language,

It leaves me bear,

I’m a talentless loser,

just felt like share–ing

 

 

 

 

Published in:  on June 29, 2006 at 10:25 pm Comments (9)

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  1. On July 3, 2006 at 11:50 am Tammy Said:

    I really like your poem and its imagery; I think it really fits you and who you are.

    Please forgive me though I’ve been taking editing classes and have had to analyze a lot of work recently so…

    Distinguish between its (possessive) and it’s (contraction for it is and it has, and whose (possessive) and who’s (contraction for who is and who has). Is “whose” in the last line referring to the heart or to the weary wearer? If it is the weary wearer, it is the subject of its clause and should be who’s. If it is the heart, use which as it is a nonhuman subject or leave it out entirely to create a more poetic effect.

    I like the “chastity belt of sorts”

  2. On July 11, 2006 at 10:17 pm cat Said:

    I love you! :)

  3. On August 22, 2006 at 2:05 pm Tea Master Cat Said:

    I think you should post something…just my opinion…it has been a while. I miss you!

  4. On November 9, 2006 at 8:48 am Tammy Said:

    It’s official…You don’t update your blog.

  5. On November 9, 2006 at 2:17 pm not the average julie Said:

    I’m horrible I know…I will update sometime soon…possibly when I no longer have three jobs and school….:)

  6. On January 24, 2007 at 5:38 am Tammy Said:

    I sent you an email saying hello, but I didn’t hear back from you. Do I not have your correct email or are you just bad at replying? I want to hear from my friends; I’m homesick dammit.

  7. On March 7, 2007 at 4:46 am Tammy Said:

    O.K. I give up…either your a slacker or I still don’t have your proper email address.

  8. On March 7, 2007 at 4:47 am Tammy Said:

    That should be you’re not your…I’m tired…I need coffee.

  9. On March 13, 2007 at 1:14 pm Meow Said:

    UPDATE YOUR DAMN BLOG JULIE! I am going to smack you when I see you …. *THWAP!*

    Much love…


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